The sun
The sun shines brightly
Up above the sky it shines
And sky weep no more
Kanyinsola Tella
O’ Sky!
Can I write something down?
Kanyinsola has written something
Will I just leave the next verse blank?
After the demo
Of the endless rain, it shines…
To fulfil his call.
So do I in the-
Storm of this challenging life
Will my glory rise.
Natur’s Pictur N’quill.
Lovely! π
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Thanks beloved
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Hahaha!
You’re very welcome, cherished! π
The Haiku is indeed beautiful! Actually, it is the first time that I am reading a such. π
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I bless my good God that you really love it Ananya…you can write yours for me to read beloved π
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Um… Now , there’s a thought…
Yes, I shall definitely try my hand at it once! π
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Alright…justtry and tag me along with it
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What – now? Um…
Is there any rules for framing a Haiku? Like three stanzas and three lines each… Something like that? Because, I like free-flowing and really don’t care how my poem flows as long as it does! π
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Haiku is a Japanese poem that captures moments with natural creations (Sun, sea, stars etc…) of Seasons (Rainy season, Spring etc…) but nowadays haiku can be written in any form… it is a poem of seventeen syllables in three line of 5-7-5.
That is: first line 5
Second 7
And third 5
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Smiles…
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Really? You like it? Thanks a ton!
I guess I shall post it, then! π
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It’s cool…
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Hahaha! Thanks a lot! π
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As you keep writing it, it becomes you…and the three lines will flow naturally beloved
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Um… All right! π
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Great, for giving it a trial, thumbs up π
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Gee, thanks! π
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Don’t forget to tag me π
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Sure! π
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π
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In few hours time, I will like to flow with you in a duel…I don’t know if you will like it π
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It is worth a try, though…
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π
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Keep being a blessing beloved π till then, ***smiles
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Please check my blog:
http://www.ananyaworld.wordpress.com
And comment! π
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Can I repost it on your blog?
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You mean, reblog? Sure, please go ahead! π
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You can also flow with it in any form but 5-7-5 will be necessary not compulsory π
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More importantly, should it rhyme???
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It depends on how you want it to be
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Great, ’cause I suck at rhyming! You have read my poem, so you must know! π
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Haiku doesn’t demand rhyme when written…
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This is lovely. Would you like to take part?
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Alright, will check
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π
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Have checked it, thanks for sharing beloved π
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Your most welcome feel free to get involved π
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I think the title is ‘shine’ right?
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The title can be anything..just make sure you have the word “shine” in it. I hope that’s clear π good luck π
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